that was too cute...
Graphics: Good, exactly what was needed. That monster was really cute.
Style: Really good style. I look forward to episode two, after you've had time/experience to do something more with flash.
Sound: Good, exactly what was needed. I'm glad you resisted the temptation of most n00b's to just bung their fav mp3 in their first movie.
Violence: There wasn't really any violence in this movie, so I just imagined you drew the computer blowing up =)
Interactivity: n/a
Humour: Cute/pointless = funny. Altho you could have had a better punchline to your whole movie. But all the im jokes were spot on.
Overall: All scores are grossly inflated cos you're a n00b. Aren't I nice =)